Teddy Bear Picnic at the Christie Street Park
Here is our shared writing about our picnic. We based it on the book "We're Going on a Bear Hunt"
We're going on a picnic
We're going to have a teddy one,
We’re excited
What a beautiful day!
Uh-uh!
Road
Busy, dangerous road.
We can't go over it.
We can't go under it.
Oh no!
We've got to go across it!
Uh-uh!
Dog poo
Stinky, yucky dog poo.
We can't go on it.
We can't go under it.
Oh no!
We've got to go around it!
Oh cool!
Play ground
A fun, awesome playground
Oh cool!
Slide
A Fast, fun slide
Oh cool!
Seesaw
A Bouncy, uppy downy seesaw
Oh cool!
Tiny cookie teddies
Yummy, crunchy tiny cookie teddies
What an exciting picnic.
ReplyDeleteI do like your poem about the picnic too.
What an exciting picnic.
ReplyDeleteI do like your poem about the picnic too.
What a wonderful fun way to reinforce their journey! I love the poo paragraph.
ReplyDeleteWhat an amazing first term. Well done to teachers, students and parents!
ReplyDeleteSuch a busy week you have all had!
ReplyDeleteThat looks like fun wish I went to.
ReplyDeleteThat looks like fun wish I went to.
ReplyDeleteI really like your poem about your how you got to the park.I also like the seesaw paragraph.
ReplyDeleteI really like your poem about your how you got to the park.I also like the seesaw paragraph.
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